BigBadBear

Thank you all so much for your comments. I have a couple things to clear up though. “Brianne! Come through the window!” Jen cried from the other side of the ...

Forgive me if I'm wrong, but this is posted in 'Narrative Poetry' and it states that this is a section for poetry that tells a story. I really appreciate all ...

The school section was just useless with all that history and political jazz. Why would we need to read that? How does it progress the story forward? Will it be ...

must post the link to this in this link or else it won't be accepted.[/url] ^_^ -Jared

Hey everyone! I know everything is a little vague. Mrs. Ross would report the Mask Maker to the police, but there is a reason she doesn't, which I'll go more ...

Really? My favorite part? INCAN: WE’RE NOT SHOUTING, WE’RE TALKING IN ALL CAPITAL LETTERS. GRIF: How does that all work out? FTW For The Win Baby. -Jared

I think this would have worked with fifty or so of the evil looking emoticons. All in all, nice work. I enjoyed every excruciatingly painful rhyme. -Jared

Thank you all for your wonderful comments. Although, I fail to see how the repetition of the email can confuse you. Please explain, because I don't understand. -Jared

Lol. Jen, you didn't understand this story. I can't critique it right now, because it's my contest, but this is supposed to be a sarcastic story! -Jared

So, just to so I comprenday, this story is about a kidnapper who has snatched the wife of a LAPD officer and a regular joe-shmoe? I assume that you will ...

O.o How did you find this poem? Haha. Wow. This brings back unwanted memories. -.- Thanks for the critique, though, Gadi. -Jared

Thank you so so much (I'm thanking you for critiquing a thank you letter. O.o) for all of the wonderful critiques and revisions! Heather >> Oh my goodness, you are ...

My 5th grade teacher read those books to them. We didn't make it past Among the Enemy, though. That book was amazing. The whole series was amazing. My favorite was ...

I'm with Suzanne and Gadi. House of Leaves was amazing, but very, very werid. -Jared

A/N: This MC is a semi-retarded teenager. Any help with making him seem like one would be much appreciated. Did you happen not to notice that? Thank you for the ...