BigBadBear

The citizens in the small city of White Rapids were getting off work and heading to their homes This should read, "The citizens in the small city of White Rapids ...

Has anyone every told you that you are a brilliant, yet twisted author? No, well, this is the first time. I have read your Honor, and I think that this ...

Hey! This is REALLY good. I just wanted to say! I hope to be able to say the truth on day On should be one. Other than that, this is ...

Ha! I loved it! Although, try not to copy the name Bella, because then people will think about Twilight, and then like yeah...unless you haven't read the book. But Just ...

Whoah. That was really long, but I enjoyed it none the less. Uh..I think I saw a spelling mistake...hold on Oh well. I can't find it right now. I know ...

What do I think? What do you THINK I think? This is freaking amazing! I loved it! Cat, you have got some grooves! lol..that was cheesy...anyway, yeah! This is intensely ...

Holy freaking crap! Are you sure you aren't a published author? Seriously! Ok, I have only read the journal entries, and you have me hooked! Ahhhh! I am now your ...

Hey! I am going to be doing an advanced edit on this, just so you can see like grammar and spelling mistakes, and such like that. Ok, here I go! ...

...I read this a long time ago. Didn't I give a review? *blushes* sorry, Kim! Well, this was really good. There was only one thing that I really didn't like ...

"for she is just a new born." New born = newborn. Hey! I liked this. You have written better, but this leaves with a good sense of mystery, which I ...

Well, that was really good. I was kind of picturing this to have a deeper meaning. Like, someone is turning you into something you're not, but that isn't how it ...

Oh...man, that is really sad. True, but sad. So, I am guessing that this Isaac Wise is a friend of yours? Well, I really liked it, but the last stanza, ...

HAHAHAHA! That was really funny. Again, Pawprint, you have done excellent. Your writing is perfect! I didn't see any errors. As for titles: (don't kill me!)

Wow. That's really powerful. It really reflects our generation. I REALLY like how you did this: "Look at me, her body says." & "She screams out, look at me!" Because ...

Hey! This is really good! I couldn't find anything other than what they had already said but this line: How long will you be there or have you already found ...