BigBadBear

... I remembered posting a comment on here! Oh well! This was good, and as ciago said, VERY SHORT. We don't have very much time to understand what is going ...

..... OMG! This was amazing! I love this story! It's so well written and...and...and...well, here is a big critique 'cause you made a few mistakes: Chapter 8 Oh well I ...

Hey! Welcome to YWS! Just a quick reminder >> only post 1 thing a day. People will be more likely to critique your poems and stuff, and it is courtesy. ...

Hmm...that was very interesting. Of course, not much of it made sense. All of the sudden the guy popped out of no where, but you said that this was in ...

Awwh...that was very sweet. Wouldn't everyone like to find a note like that? Anyway, I'll do another big critique: (remember to double space between each paragraph!) I finally calmed down, ...

Kim! I was so happy that I found out that you had written more and posted it! Oh, man, this chapter was FANTASTIC! I often wonder how you can write ...

Awesome. Author, you are a great writer. It was terribly sad, even know I had no idea what was going on. I love the way that you write. It makes ...

Hey! Well, I just wanted to say that I have read this and I liked it, all though there are numerous mistakes which I will kindly point out tomorrow. Great ...

.... Oh my gosh! I love this book. As always, I couldn't find one mistake, which really bummed me out. So now i guess I'll have to go on blabbing ...

Hey! This was not how I was expecting this story to turn out. lol. Well, it was ok, but not my favorite. Maybe it's just that I'm not all into ...

Great! The only thing I noticed was the 'to' and it's supposed to be 'too'. Other than that, this was great. I could totally see your point and everything, and ...

Holy cow! Fangala, this is amazing. I loved it. "I'm addicted to your orbit and beyond recovery when I stole your heart it was an accident-- it just sort of...happened ...

*stares in awe at the amazement and excitement that he received from this wondrous chapter* Holy cow, dude! This was amazing! Ok, there were a couple things that I will ...

Whoa. This is awesome! I loved it! Well, the only thing that you need to know is that this is called a prologue, not a prelude. A prelude is a ...

Wow! That was really good! I wanna read more! it was rumored that she ahd taken out This should read, " It was rumored that she had taken out..." That ...