BigBadBear

*gasp* Whoa, dude. I just got this... this tingle up my neck as I read that last line! Dude, that was awesome! The ryhming was rather... forced. This poem rhymed, ...

Hey, Oye! Sup? I don't think I've read anything of yours ever. Let's see how it turns out! The screen came loose easily and I threw it aside before trying ...

Hey, there! I'm critiquing as I go along so yeah. You have been in the car too long, he told himself, focus on the road and you’ll get there soon ...

Hey, Kylan! Wonderful story you have going here! I'm critiquing as I'm reading. Nikola grunted and fell forward, his chin ramming against a hunched slab of concrete and his vision ...

Hey, Kylan! I read about this in your blog that you never use. LOL! So, how's it going? Nikola looked away from Dmitry as the older teenager took a long ...

Eghad! This was probably the best story you've written so far. I mean... it was really great. I really liked it. Your grammar has gotten really great. Screaming. Dying echoes ...

Hey! I'm here, due to your friggen awesome request. :) Too human to be an animal, too animal to be a human. Just wanted to tell you that this was ...

This is probably the most true poem there could ever be. Heck, I don't think that anything this... uh... what's the word... this clear could've been written. Especially by you. ...

Ack! You can't be serious! This is the end?! Ugh! This was way too good. Too good for my eyes. xD Anyway, you've edited like mad, so I couldn't spot ...

I'm baaaack! You know, right now I am reading Misery by Steven King. It's a thriller novel - just like this. You may have read it or seen the movie. ...

Hey! I'm glad you posted in my Will Review for Food thingy. Haha. In fact... I've heard quite a lot about this story. I've never read it though. It looks ...

Hey! I can't wait to read this! It sounds amazing! We were neighbours until Junior High, Junior High doesn't need to be capitalized. :) when his Mother needed to be ...

Hey, buddy. What's up? Nice little song you've got here. It's really creative and the title rocks. Seriously. Huh... [Intro Verse] Feeling the life charging around me Taking every little ...

Ugh. Thanks for the cliffhanger... :( I didn't notice anything this time around. You are a really fantastic author. Seriously. You always have me riveted to my seat and... and... ...

Hey, Bear. Awesome name, btw. I set down the pack and sighed. My eyes had started to hurt again. They had been bothering me more and more, those days . ...