BigBadBear

Hah! This was so great! I'm really enjoying reading all of these, and I hope you continue to post them. DAVID But, Mom-- MOM David, no. DAVID Mom-- MOM David, ...

I enjoyed this. In fact, at times, I felt like I was actually watching it acted out on stage and I was laughing to myself and the little jokes and ...

I'm useless at reviewing prose, but I thought I'd drop by to say, good god I missed your writing. Amen to that. Kylan, You have the uncanny ability to take ...

Hey! So I would love to review this, but this is a bit much to review. So I would advise you to break this up into three or so different ...

I read Ray Bradbury's novel Fahrenheit 451 over the summer and I can honestly say it has become my favorite novel of all time. Never before has a book struck ...

Kylan, this is the best poem that you've written in a while, even if you did write it a while back. I'm not going to critique it because I fail ...

blackbird12, I love how every time I log onto this site, there's a new work posted by you. It makes me happy. Well, I didn't expect this poem to be ...

blackbird12, I went through your portfolio because I think you're a really good author, and I want to read something good, so here it goes. It is early morning and ...

Holly, So, I really, really liked this poem. It has a great meaning and a great subject and you've managed to be vague enough to capture and hold my interest, ...

blackbird12, You have created a fantastic short story right here. I've been on the look for a good short story, and I clicked on this one because of it's intriguing ...

Kylan, Your first sentence can get rid of that comma, seeing as that last part is not a complete sentence. The air snug as surgeon's gloves snapped. I don't like ...

originalhobbit, Red stains on the carpet, contrasting brilliant white, the hands that left them, soaked with red, are begging to be cleaned. As with every piece of writing, you need ...

Hey, Munchkinzzles, I can relate to this story probably more than any other story on this site. My brother did drugs for four years without anyone in our family knowing, ...

Hey, icanbefixed! So, I basically love the whole genre of action/adventure, and I think that you've got what it takes to pull out a decent story. You really do. However, ...

Galerius, I love your poetry so much. I don't have much to say with this, so I'll expand what I do want to tell you. I love, love, love how ...