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Haha, wow, I am floored by all these awesome reviews. Truly I do not deserve them! XD Anyway, I think everyone who's been commenting and following. You're all awesome! Unfortunately ...

Holy crap, I disappeared for the weekend to watch a concert and then suddenly I got inundated with replies! You guys are the best. ^^ I'll reply to all your ...

Thanks for all the reviews, everyone. I'm a little busy to reply individually right now but I promise I'll get round to it eventually. And PM me if you need ...

You both mentioned this so probably best to respond to that part first. First I'll put my reason for putting it in. Basically when I was first putting this story ...

Thanks for reading! For the political mumbo-jumbo... My reasoning for that is that this is a different universe than ours. You'll find out later that there has been a plot ...

Hi, Doctor, here I am for the second part. ^^ Well...the name change is a bit odd, and I'm not sure if I like it...but I'll get used to it, ...

Just wanted to say that last time I checked, I was a girl. ~_^ Also, looking back I realize it's not that I don't understand the sentence, it's that I ...

I'm back for the rest (which will just be my overall thoughts): As before, I really enjoyed this and wish I could come up with more to criticize, but honestly, ...

If you're looking for dark humor, anything Kurt Vonnegut is the way to go.

And I'm back with the rest of the review. He hopped off the motorcycle and gave me a kiss on the cheek. This would be better phrased as "kissed me ...

Aughhh...this preface thing. XD My personal preferences are coming in play, but I really don't like the idea of prefaces. This reads much more like a first chapter than a ...

And I'm back! Fixing antiviruses can be a pain... I obeyed her words like law, and only engaged with Council members when she instructed me to do so. It was ...

I feel bad for this, but I'm back now, so...ba-bump.

Try anything by Kurt Vonnegut and George Orwell. They seem to be from the time period that you enjoy, and are brilliant writers to boot.

Yay, there's more! Anyway, you know the drill. Time for more nitpicking. :) Over the next month, arrangements for the move to the Kalagat were being made. Is this passive ...