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Re: Cat Steps (1.0) Draft
All right, time I took a crack at this! Gryph and Stella have already given you excellent reviews, so I won't spend too long touching on the same points they ...
Sep 12, 2011 -
Re: Chapter One
Dude. I love this. You must do more. You absolutely must, or I unspeakable things. Normally I wouldn't be so emphatic about liking something, but I see you've said you've ...
Sep 12, 2011 -
Re: Cat Steps draft (28/4/11)
Hi, Rosey! It's fitting that my first review in months should be for your story. Hahaha, by now, how many openings have you gone through? So you probably won't much ...
Jun 30, 2011 -
Re: Call of the Dragon-Chaper One Part One
Hey, it's me again~ Remember me from the prologue? What I liked: To be honest, after reading the prologue, I wasn't really interested in reading further. I'm glad I decided ...
Nov 13, 2010 -
Re: Call of the Dragon-Prologue Newly Revised
Hey bluewaterlily, I'm here to give you a review. This is a very interesting idea. Is the story going to feature dragon protagonists throughout? Because that'd make it hella unique. ...
Oct 17, 2010 -
Re: Chapter One
Hey emmylou, let me take a crack at your story. Be warned that I can get very nitpicky and in-depth, it's just the way I roll so don't be intimidated, ...
Aug 20, 2010 -
Re: The Imaginary Prologue
Hey fruityminyi, let me take a crack at your piece. To be honest, I don't see a point in combing through this line by line, because I think the problems ...
Aug 13, 2010 -
Re: Demigod
Hi, Torigirl, let me take a crack at these first two chapters. Be warned that my style is very in depth and nitpicky, so if you see big walls of ...
Aug 11, 2010 -
Re: Scarlet Killer~1
Hey KitxKat, I'm going to take a crack at your piece. Be warned that I can get very nitpicky and in-depth--don't let that scare you off. The club is pumping. ...
Aug 11, 2010 -
Re: The Pack Chapter 1 Part 1
Hi Lethero, let me take a crack at your piece. Be warned that I can get very nitpicky and in-depth, though I won't be as rambly as I sometimes am ...
Aug 11, 2010 -
Re: Blue Flames and Bloodshot Eyes (Chapter 2)
Hi Razzker, here's me for round two. I think you know what my reviewing style looks like now, so let's on to it, shall we? It was getting uncomfortable for ...
Aug 10, 2010 -
Re: Blue Flames and Bloodshot Eyes (Chapter 1)
Hey Razzker. Hope you don't mind me adding my two cents as well. Be warned that I can go very in depth and my style is nothing if not nitpicky, ...
Aug 10, 2010 -
Re: Prologue
Hi Porter, it seems like you've got plenty of good reviews so far so I'll try to keep this short. No guarantees, because I do tend to ramble. To be ...
Aug 10, 2010 -
Re: Seasonless 60% of Chapter 1
Hey there, I'll take a crack at your revised version. Be warned that I can get very nitpicky and in-depth--I can write paragraphs picking apart an entire sentence. Don't let ...
Aug 9, 2010 -
Re: Assembly-- Chapter One
Hey there, Zan. Here's your review as requested. Hopefully it makes sense, since my sister is sitting behind me playing Touhou very loudly. Which is more than a little distracting. ...
Aug 7, 2010
