Beware

I like the shortness of the words because they give great rhythm which I think is important in poetry. I feel that the first 'but' in the third satnza could ...

I think it could have been shorter with just the more essential parts so that the rhyming would seem less forced. But then again I really like the way the ...

Ok, so maybe it's a little self centred, but all people are selfish. Some are just more honest about it than others. There's a lot of emotion in this piece ...

I agree that the first stanza could do with an 'I' to start it off and I do personally prefer it when each line begins with a capital letter, but ...

Well, the time passed a little bit too fast for my liking. I guess I like to linger in the moment... but on the whole I think it's a really ...

I really like the first part of the poem, but after that it did start to go downhill a bit. The feeling of defiance in the second verse/stanza is great ...