BethsLlama

Really great poem! The theme was very clear and the rhythm and structure was great. You didn't add any more to it than what it needed. It is a very ...

Thank you very much! This really boosted my self-confidence in writing!

Thanks! I will work on my literation and fix the genre setting.

I really liked the essay! You have a very clear idea of who the audience you are writing are. You also backed up your thesis statement quite well. I had ...

Hello! Great story, it had a good theme. I had a hard time bonding with the characters, but other than the characters it's pretty solid. I like your voice in ...

Really nice poem! The rhythm was really great and I loved the power that each word in the poem had!

Great poem! I loved how accurate you were on the feeling of falling in love. Also, your metaphors were epic. The pacing was spot on, same with the rhythm! It's ...

Feel free for criticisms and let me know of any errors!

This story was really sweet. I wanted to know the story of his love, and how it came to be for them to have a really big place in his ...

Hello! I had a hard time getting the rhythmn of the poem. I like the main theme and how it suggests notions and questions for people to reflect on.

I really liked this poem!