BellaRoma

Hope you guys enjoy this :) Wish me luck with this new plotline. More coming soon! The next chapter follows on, if anyone is worried about Layla's (lack of) reaction

This was a random plot jump, and I do intend to plug the gap (which isn't as big as it seems). Thank you for all the reviews! I need a ...

It is terribly rushed in places... Now I have the opposite problem XD

Thanks! This is only a draft.

*cough* Mercy hints at what'll happen next *cough*

Yay! I'm glad you enjoyed it. Oh, the staying at Sara's thing... that's to do with next chapter. Look forward to seeing your comments.

When I follow Sara's POV, I'm sure Aiden will be telling her his side of the story.

Oh, I never asked... Did this tell you more about Aiden's motives, and the bigger plan? I gave him a reason to hate Layla so. Does it make more sense ...

Thanks! I look forward to seeing your thoughts :)

A suggestion: why not say about her brain has gone light etc.? It would make for a much more powerful ending and it would be easier to understand.... Can you ...

I read the reply. It sounds like a good premise.

Mainly the one imagining the imaginary friend. It's really a bit of both, though.

No way! My novel has the exact same title.... Reading this, the stories aren't even that different (except my MC is a girl). Do you plan to continue this?

You know what my most powerful Doc line was? "She'll be fine, if a little... worn around the edges." So much creep factor.

Thank you for sharing this story.