BellaRoma

Okay, PM me if you think that's best. I get what you mean; it could take a while. Like I say, I'm glad you're enjoying this. I'm enjoying writing it.

I've thought of something it can do. Might be another nail in Mercy's coffin (metaphor). I'll post it on the club wall when it's done.

Yay! You got to it. I have to say, I'm glad that this has come out well enough. I was worried that it wouldn't work. Don't know why... Maybe you ...

Next chapter I'm going back to the machine... Yes, that one you commented on. All I'll say is that it only works from Layla's POV. Mercy has not been forgotten...

Okay. I saw 3.3! Read it, will review soon.

Okay, thanks for reviewing! The next chapters have very few flashbacks and they have jumped ahead. Layla at the end, with the doctor in the cell, is 14-15. As for ...

Thanks. Like I told timmy, I've not actually written an escape scene before. In my head, I was trying to work out how they would bust out and it kind ...

Cool! Parts 7b and 8 are up, so you aren't terribly behind. In Part 8 I finally introduced a new character and - guess what - she doesn't hate Layla!

Thank you for reviewing. I found this chapter difficult to write (and the second part), so I'd say it's pretty rough atm. The next chapter is pretty fast paced; it ...

Thanks. I love reading your reviews. Don't worry about Mercy, I'm going to use her POV next. Sorry, but I know what I'm doing with the quotes. It's the same ...

Hey! I'm mainly just introducing Sara. Mercy's impressions of her are coming up soon... For anyone who was wondering, luminol is meant to be a liquid used to test for ...

Thanks. The next chapter is coming soon. As to pacing, I said it all happened in a blur, I imagined it happening really fast. This is the first escape scene ...

BTW I've actually been using different speech marks the whole time. When Layla 'talks' to Mercy, I put single quotes. Double quotes when she's talking out loud, so the conversations ...

Thanks!

Lol. I totally misinterpreted that!