BellaRoma

This is a brilliant attempt for your first story. The use of 'you' really made it creepy because I felt like I was actually there in the desolate town. It ...

Ah, science and writing; my two favourite things in the whole wide world. This poem combines them neatly in a way one might not expect them to. I loved the ...

I liked the idea of the old shelf with all it's books and the secrets they hold. Do you like reading because I got a real sense that you were ...

Impressive. As I read this it was easy to tell what this poem was about. Fairly obvious but still never expressly said. The dark imagery was powerful but what was ...

Okay. I've just read both parts to your story. The title alone intrigued me so I simply had to have a look. 'Confines' sounds quite dark and forboding which was ...

Hi. I'm getting the hang of this reviewing thing now. Let's start with the good points. The detail you go into about your character is awesome. It shows you really ...

I thought that the poem was really descriptive and there was an amazing scene forming in my mind. Like you said, the garden of Eden. The reference to painters and ...

Not bad. Very short but it does alright for funny. I loved the mischievous tone and how your narrator seems to be a bit of an anarchist. It sounds like ...

Wow. Just read all three chapters, I enjoyed the whole concept of the two separate races very much. I've read similar concepts in sci-fi novels but the fantasy setting and ...

Quite a short story but it packed a mighty punch. As i'm sure others have said the fact that you wait to the very end to reveal the narrator's identity. ...

Definitely the most chilling piece I've read on here, I felt like I was really inside your main character's head. The ending left me hanging on. There are quite a ...

I liked the mysteriousness of the voices and the way you slowly developed them into characters. I also found the hidden picture puzzles in the magazine interesting, they reminded me ...