BeautifulDoom

I like this a lot. It's actually kind of deep. I only have a few nitpicks: 1. It's very well written, but also kind of vague. You should try giving ...

Wow, I really love this. It's different, and really good. You have a lot of talent, and you're only twelve! I'm impressed. This was very well written, with perfect grammar. ...

Hey, Ben! :] Here I am to review your story. I'm gonna do a really thorough review, because you've always done the same for me! xD By the way, I ...

Wow. This is really interesting. I think that it's wonderful because it's creepy. I think you did a really good job on this. It's interesting, suspensful, and fun to read. ...

I loved this. Like Ben said, it was dun to read. My favorite was that last line. I really liked it because it was kind of explaining the whole poem ...

Hi, Bottomless Eyes and Eday! Bottomless Eyes asked me to review this story, so here I go. Before I do anything, I'd just like to say that the plot is ...

I'm gonna review this in a pretty pink color! I sat there astonished that Cameron wasn't saying anything. I gasped aloud, and said "So I'm right? You are my guardian ...

I love this! It is seriously entertaining and a good piece of writing. I love the fact that you made the eight-year-old have her little plots and ways to irritate ...

Hello! I thought this was a truly interesting piece of work. I'm gonna do my best to express my feelings on this. In a very pretty blue color. I felt ...

Hi, MattRaven94! I'm gonna review this in a pretty purple color. :] You hide from me behind a glass wall, Love this part, gives an image and is a great ...

This is wonderful. Great wording, the last stanza is my favorite :] If you have the time, I'd really appreciate if you reviewed the first chapter in my new story. ...