BeachRose21

Thanks alot guys. This is exactly what I needed. I think I may completely cut out this chapter and spread its descriptions through out the rest.

I truly enjoyed this poem. It just sucked me in and I could see all the scenes. Your imagery is magnifique. Keep up the great work. =)

I really like this. The images are great! I love the message about how the moonlight reveals the beauty.

LauRux thank you for your review this is the first of my stories I have ever really written besides the regular stuff for school. English is my week subject so ...

Wow this is really nice. I'm so happy that there was a happy ending. You did really well with this poem I ended hoping with the narrator that it would ...