Published January 9, 2011
I wander in the night. The moon is my guide. It illuminates even the worst of sites and makes them glorious and beautiful.
I see the monsters of nature and the glow standing on their back which brings out the true beauty of the creation of God. In the sunlight the sight is terrible and the hairs on their backs are filthy and grey.
I see the dead and wilted grass on the ground that in sunlight would be a terrible brown. In the moonlight I see only that glow standing on the blades of grass making the beauty stand out in the black immensity of the night.
Only in the moonlight are the untold wonders of the world exposed that the sunlight can not show.
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I LOVE IT!!! YOU DID SO GOOD!!!!!!!!
I love This part: " I see the dead and wilted grass on the ground that in sunlight would be a terrible brown. In the moonlight I see only that glow standing on the blades of grass making the beauty stand out in the black immensity of the night.
Only in the moonlight are the untold wonders of the world exposed that the sunlight can not show."
You did fantastic!!!
I really like this. The images are great! I love the message about how the moonlight reveals the beauty.
I love this writing! The imagery is spectacular. Keep on writing and persuing your dreams! TYou have what it takes!
You are a very talented young man with a great deal of creativity.