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Re: Dip, Dip, Potato Chip.
I don't have much to say about this since it's so short. I like satirical poems about modern life, and you delivered on that front. It's so true to the ...
Nov 22, 2016 -
Re: 25 Things to Remember When You Become a Book Character
The references to different fandoms are hilarious. The more general entries are also funny, and they have the added benefit of being a "what tropes should I avoid in my ...
Nov 22, 2016 -
Re: This Was Beauty (When Women Wore Curves)
Was this about how women aren't as attractive these days? If so, I find that sexist. (Sorry, I'm trying not to be harsh). I don't understand all the metaphors, and ...
Nov 20, 2016 -
Re: The Evolution of Disney Princesses
I love this. Everything about it. When I started reading, I thought this would be another over sensitive rant about how Disney is the bane of young girls, or maybe ...
Nov 18, 2016 -
Re: The Moon in Everyone's Sky
The descriptions have so much potential! I can see this as an excerpt from a teen romance novel. (That's not always a bad thing.) However, you switched tenses from past ...
Nov 18, 2016 -
Re: Chapter One: Cove
Thanks. :)
Nov 18, 2016