Baileyboo:)

This poem creates great imagery! And i like the formation of the stanzas, it fits rather well with the way the poem was writen. And in any sense it is ...

this poem is really nice, i liked it:) and the rhythm wasn't entirely bad. I can relate to this, and i enjoy that. the end was my favorite part though ...

This was very nice, but you need to use spell check. Also, the format switched during the middle of the poem. For the first few stanzas, it was rhyming at ...

This poem is really good, i thought the stanzas were really well thought out. But i do have one TINY problem with this. The last two stanzas first sentences match ...

ahaha :P love you Brie. But yes indeed, it is very fortunate that there is people like you out there :D

This was really good, I just noticed one mistake. When you said "Your lips, your kiss make me glad I'm still here." It should be "Your lips, your kiss makes ...

WOW this is really good. Im really curious to find out what happens next. You should put a little more detail in to your characters though. I'm really anxious to ...

This is a good poem.:) I like the meaning of it. It kinda souds like you copied a Martina McBride song that i know though. Trapped in the hands of ...