BaileyTheHoosier

Thank you, a lot of those were just little mistakes that I didn't really go back and look at. Truthfully, this was just a narrative essay for school that I ...

Thank you, and yeah. It took a lot out of me to write this. So by the time I had revised and made this somewhat readable, I was drained. I'll ...

Thank you so much

I agree completely with your review. Honestly, this is probably my weakest piece my a mile. I don't like what I did with it at all. The purpose was strictly ...

Thank you so much!

Thank you so much!

Thank you for the feedback! This is honestly one of the worst poems I've written. The rhymes seem forced to me and there's a lot of petty mistakes that I ...

It's a fantastic poem, once again. I love how you took this from the perspective of a parent looking back at their kid's life. It's a reminder to always take ...