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  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Grandma Climbed a Tree and Refused to Come Down

    Hello brokestarvingwriter, This poem has humor and is interesting. I could not spot any mistakes in grammar, and the rhyming was mostly consistent throughout the poem. However, I do not ...

    Feb 28, 2010
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Mountainside Magnificence

    Hello BumbleBear, I will review your work today. First of all, the rhyme scheme and the rhythm was greatly well made giving the poem a splendid flow to it. The ...

    Feb 27, 2010
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: The Best Book Ever Read

    The best books that I have read... are in the list below: They are in the order from my most favorite to my least. LIST 1. The Hobbit by J.R.R. ...

    Jan 17, 2010


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