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naw, you didn't sound harsh.

Well, I don't think there's any one right way to do it. The thing about advice is, you can take it or leave it. I think that MaryEvans has a ...

Well, I don't think there's any one right way to do it. The thing about advice is, you can take it or leave it. I think that MaryEvans has a ...

Ayesha! Thanks for the detailed and very helpful review #^-^# So first off, I'm not sure if you noted this but these dreams are actually very different to his normal ...

that's a good idea. I'm going off YWS now, but if some review pops up for one of your works, don't be surprised. I find it funny that your comments ...

Okay well, age - I'm nineteen and I think my writing's pretty good. Not excellent, not okay, just pretty good for my age. When I was fifteen, I had a ...

AW COME ON. Okay first off, I like your idea! Please stop being so dejected. Secondly, we all have down times. I don't know how old you are, but no ...

THIS IS VERY FUNNY. I'd say adjust the first entry to suit the rest, writing-style-wise. Otherwise though, ah I laughed so much.

Well hello, lass. Thank you for the lighting, I needed that to get my UFO in safely landed. First off, you ain't harsh, I agree with most of what you ...

Oh no you're right, this chapter would definitely benefit from more carachos! But I find it hard to write that way, because I always get hung up on the setting ...

Hey Rei! What. You're allowed to give me weird names. So, first off, awesome, and I'm going to keep you around because commas are my bane and kryptonite o---O I ...

Thanks for your review, Tiaradyson! (but I think I got some work to do before I reach the Professional Author Level :DD)

You mean the / ? I added that because a question mark seemed too much of an even, polished ending, and I didn't want to leave it open. Imagine it ...

haha, thanks for the review! I like the 'eyeballs'. It exemplifies that things aren't as pretty as they might like to be, and at the same time shows a tenderness ...

hey! Thanks for the review! Hmm I thought the folder was the name of the novel? Well that's irritating >:/ So the fancy-printy-word up there is the novel's name? *considers*.. ...