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  • Other » Narrative, Other Re: Mechanical Jellyfish: October

    you know, it's not really about courage. it's about giving yourself permission to write the stories you want to write. I think every great writer has come across a piece ...

    Dec 29, 2013
  • Other » Narrative, Other Re: Mechanical Jellyfish: October

    West Side Writers! Woo-hoo! yeah. well thanks for the feedback. to answer your question, these are in fact dreams. I'm working on a non-fiction book of dreams from the year ...

    Dec 29, 2013
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Endless Summer

    thank you very much for the review. were you referring to the quote tags in the Improvement portion of your critique? because now that you mention it I was a ...

    Nov 23, 2013
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Endless Summer

    hi, BenToomey thanks for the review. you're right the "Apocalypse How?" in this story is a bit unusual. to be honest this story was based on a dream I had ...

    Nov 13, 2013
  • Short Story » Romantic, Teen Fiction Re: Rain

    religion aside, as writers and artists we should never attempt to stifle another person's creativity or try to censor creative work for fear of offending someone.

    Nov 12, 2013
  • Other » General, General Re: Mechanical Jellyfish: September

    thanks. I've actually used some of my dreams as sort of triggers for some of my more recent short stories. as far as remembering all this stuff, it's actually pretty ...

    Oct 27, 2013
  • Other » General, General Re: Mechanical Jellyfish: September

    thanks. glad you enjoyed it. this work is actually part of a year-long series I'm doing so check out my portfolio if you want to read some more.

    Oct 27, 2013
  • Other » Other, Other Re: Mechanical Jellyfish: A Year in Dreams (August)

    hey, thanks for that Hannah. I can't tell you how much I appreciate your comment. also, I'm gonna be taking you up on that PM. I so rarely get constructive ...

    Jun 30, 2013
  • Other » General, Fantasy Re: Mechanical Jellyfish: A Year in Dreams (January-July)

    thanks. I've been keeping a dream journal for the past three years. at first I was barely able to recollect anything, just bits and pieces. but the more I wrote ...

    Jun 15, 2013
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: .

    Thank you. I was going for a minimalist style with this piece. I originally had a complete sentence but I thought it was just too wordy. One quick question, the ...

    Mar 31, 2013
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: The Last Kind Man

    Thanks for your comment. I'm not a very good writer.

    Mar 31, 2013
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: The Last Kind Man

    Thank you. I actually struggled with the idea of bringing the fruit cart man back at the end but I wasn't sure how to go about doing it. I think ...

    Mar 20, 2013
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: The Last Kind Man

    Thanks for your comment. I think you are right. I need to work on this voice more and try to make it more consistent.

    Mar 20, 2013
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: .

    I know it looks like a solid block of text. I have no idea why my indentations don't appear. If you have a solution please help. I really want people ...

    Mar 5, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: The Disappearance: Prologue

    ^^ No problemo

    Mar 4, 2013


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