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Re: First And Only Tear
hi good day i'm BabyLa1989 and i would be doing your review today. first, your title prepositions or conjunctions of 4 letters or fewer should not be capitalized unless they ...
Oct 15, 2012 -
Re: Accidents Happen
Grammar Suggestions Did you mean...: but lets make [suggestions: let's make] Did you mean...: lets go [suggestions: let's go] Missing apostrophe: out Im [suggestions: I'm] Missing apostrophe: Im [sugg
Oct 14, 2012 -
Re: Who Don't hear go feel!!!
no its not its fiction.
Oct 14, 2012 -
Re: I'm Sorry (My Mistake)
i love this poem, some times in life we decide to go our separate parts, elevating ourselves and sometimes some people get stringed on... its not that we willfully do ...
Oct 11, 2012 -
Re: Love
i like it. :) there is also an error in the last word of the first line, i think is should have been compare.
Oct 11, 2012 -
Re: Vagrant mother
thanks Elinor! :)
Oct 11, 2012 -
Re: say it already 8-3-1
thanks for the comment.
Mar 9, 2010 -
Re: Vagrant mother
hi hi thanks for the comment and advice!!! :) yours Respectfully BaByLa
Mar 7, 2010