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for purposes of clarity, this is NOT about rape victims is symbolic like the description suggests it is about public image. all feedback is welcome though;)

I am sorry for offending you. i didnt intend to thank you the review and sorry once again

thank you so much for the feedback! I have made changes and also I was hesitant to use cock for fear of misinterpretation but rooster works as well, thank you ...

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I am not going to lie. I had to read this three times.. it is complex yet simple, crazy yet sane, relatable yet unrelatable. In short, I LOVED IT. I ...

thank you so much !!! i can give a summary of this poem for me... well, obviously it is about false hope.The crack in the cell for me symbolised that ...

thanks a lot

well,this poem is speaking volumes. The hopelessness of the speaker attracts me to this writing given the complexity of the dilemma she is facing. Torn between getting out and then ...

Thank you so much..I'll work on it

Oh God, this is really really good! The nostalgia is real and powerful and I feel the pain of loss, the speaker is nostalgic about her used to be partner ...

thanks a lot for taking time to review my work.. i must say your interpretation is spot on.

thank you so much for the constructive feedback ...I will work on the areas you have pointed out. thanks again

I look forward to your honest comments