Azula

This is actually rather good for being written in a minute. In fact, it would still be rather good if had been written in a more substantial amount of time. ...

This is clever, if a little bit morbid. I like the way you alternate starting and ending the verses with "My name is Polly/I am-was a pig." It gives more ...

It is good, it definitely conveyed the story the way you said you were trying to. I especially liked the third stanza where Delilah's hate for Samson is really made ...

Hi Flower-Child, I apologize in advance if this review ends up being horrible. Romantic poetry was something I forgot to add to my list of might reviews. But here goes: ...

Aside from what Calligraphy said, there isn't much left to fix. But I definitely agree that the line "Losing a loved on" doesn't need to be repeated quite so often. ...

This story is strange. Not to say that I didn't like it, but it was definitely very creative(which is good). But in comparison, nervousness is surprisingly very strong. This doesn't ...

Congratulations on being able to perform it for your drama class!This has come a long way since the first two drafts, and I really like this version. Okay, now on ...

This piece was good, but there are still a few things I noticed that could be better. First of all, the ideas contained within the sentences are a little bit ...

I really enjoyed this, and could see the emotion behind it. But of course, this wouldn't be a helpful review at all if I didn't have some point to it. ...

I think this piece was good(it carried a simplistic, sad atmosphere, which is awesome), but could be better with some revision. "The rain began to fall. I rushed outside to ...