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Re: Deleted 42
"rain tracing skinless muscle" makes my tongue flop a bit. its hard-to-pronounce-ness stands out from the rest of the poem oddly and doesn't seem to fit with the image its ...
May 29, 2014 -
Re: Watercolor Smash
These are beautiful, Jenthura! I really like the first one. It is bordering on abstract but has so much more emotion than any "real thing" could. There is something nostalgic ...
Feb 8, 2012 -
Re: Detachment
Hello. I really am not a poet and am much less a poetry reviewer, but since I offered and you asked, here I am. I'll try and make myself useful. ...
Oct 27, 2011 -
Re: Musings of a Quiet God: Fragments
hello. allow me to present the special review-a-la-lowercase,* just for you. this was an interesting read, my friend. you have some really interesting concepts here, honestly, and they certainly make ...
Oct 6, 2011 -
Re: Professor Morgenstern
You already have a lot of excellent reviews on this, and more Likes than I think I have ever seen on a literary piece (congratulations, for what it's worth). Because ...
Sep 21, 2011 -
Re: The Council of Seven
It's been a while, and I'm sure my critiquing muscles are quite rusty, so please bare with me. I apologize in advance for any shortcomings of this review. /obligatory apology. ...
Sep 11, 2011 -
Re: Burning up (Second edit)
Howdy thar, par'ner. (
Jun 27, 2011 -
Re: Summer Will Suck.
Hi there Kara (I'm gonna keep calling you that even though it has nothing to do with your new username, k? K)! I'm here to give you your contest review. ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: Bleu Celeste - Part 2
Hi there, Calli! I'm here to give you your contest review. It's to let you know the things Ranger and I talked about while judging so you can understand our ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: Orbitals
Hiya! I'm here to give you your contest review. I assume you already know that the contest has been judged and the winners announced? Well, this review is to let ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: Influenza
Ahoy! I'm here from the contest. :} As you probably know, it's already been judged and the winners have already been announced. This review is to let you know the ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: keeping time-contest entry
I wrote a short story around a year ago called Keeping Time. It was one of my favorite things I ever wrote. Hm. Anyway. This is a beautifully-written piece. It ...
Jun 25, 2011 -
Re: Blue Sky
Hi there, meg! As you probably know, the contest is over and judged and I'm coming to give you a review. :] This review will be mostly to let you ...
Jun 23, 2011 -
Re: Sons of Mars
Hi there, PointetoLlama. ;} I come from The Contest. This review is mainly to let you know what aspects of the story Ranger and I discussed while judging, so I'm ...
Jun 22, 2011 -
Re: Influenza
Hey, Pipette! I'm here to give you your review from the contest. I know how much trouble you had with this genre, and I know it's a really hard genre ...
Jun 20, 2011
