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Azathoth

  • Short Story » Narrative, Mystery / Suspense Re: 'Til All the Leaves Turn Grey

    I haven’t been on this site or written a review in a long while, but this is definitely a pleasant first read for coming back. Not that nuclear bombs are ...

    Nov 25, 2024
  • Short Story » Narrative, General Re: The Lookers

    Hey there, here’s my review of your awesome short story. First of all, I really like the metaphors used in this piece. It’s interesting and complex but still understandable. As ...

    Aug 23, 2023
  • Short Story » Romantic, Humor Re: Sportball?

    Hey there, I'm here in the middle of the night to give you a review. First of all, I just want to say that this is great so far and ...

    Aug 22, 2023
  • Short Story » Supernatural, Other Re: Qetsiyah Martin’s story-Circus of horrors

    Hey, here's my review of your great story from my inexperienced perspective. First of all, I loved how you opened the story with the introduction of the time period, instantly ...

    Aug 20, 2023
  • Short Story » Narrative, Fantasy Re: Time & Space (Part 1)

    Hello. I may not be a genius when it comes to writing but I would still love to give you a review for your great story, or this part of ...

    Mar 12, 2023
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: The clown with the artificial doll eyes

    I'm new here and I'm a bit late to the party, but I have opinions, lots of 'em. Good ones, don't worry. Here's my review: First of all, I very ...

    Mar 11, 2023


Don't aim at success--the more you aim at it and make it a target, the more you are going to miss it. For success, like happiness, cannot be pursued; it must ensue, and it only does so as the unintended side-effect of one's dedication to a cause greater than oneself or as the by-product of one's surrender to a person other than oneself.
— Viktor E. Frankl