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Azathoth

Azathoth

  • Short Story » Narrative, Mystery / Suspense Re: 'Til All the Leaves Turn Grey

    I haven’t been on this site or written a review in a long while, but this is definitely a pleasant first read for coming back. Not that nuclear bombs are ...

    Nov 25, 2024
  • Short Story » Narrative, General Re: The Lookers

    Hey there, here’s my review of your awesome short story. First of all, I really like the metaphors used in this piece. It’s interesting and complex but still understandable. As ...

    Aug 23, 2023
  • Short Story » Romantic, Humor Re: Sportball?

    Hey there, I'm here in the middle of the night to give you a review. First of all, I just want to say that this is great so far and ...

    Aug 22, 2023
  • Short Story » Supernatural, Other Re: Qetsiyah Martin’s story-Circus of horrors

    Hey, here's my review of your great story from my inexperienced perspective. First of all, I loved how you opened the story with the introduction of the time period, instantly ...

    Aug 20, 2023
  • Short Story » Narrative, Fantasy Re: Time & Space (Part 1)

    Hello. I may not be a genius when it comes to writing but I would still love to give you a review for your great story, or this part of ...

    Mar 12, 2023
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: The clown with the artificial doll eyes

    I'm new here and I'm a bit late to the party, but I have opinions, lots of 'em. Good ones, don't worry. Here's my review: First of all, I very ...

    Mar 11, 2023


When your heart gets pierced with arrows, don't rip them out and pierce those around you in retribution for your hurt. You'll only unnecessarily wound others and bleed to death yourself.
— LadyMysterio