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  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Ten Negative Signs That You're A Writer

    Hi! I'm Sarah! This list, to me, is absolutly true! I know what you mean! Okay, to give you a heads up, these are my thoughts on reading this...*dramatic music* ...

    Feb 5, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: To Clean Where You Sit

    Hello! I'm Sarah, and welcome to YWS! Anyway, this is really emotional and....well, aweosme! It's has this dark air around it, it's a nice feel to have every once and ...

    Feb 3, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Spiritual Re: Elder-Chapter 1 (Preview)

    Hey! I'm Sarah here to review! Alrighty, I loved this peice, really descriptive! It pains a picture in my mind, which is a nice thing! It's as if I'm in ...

    Feb 3, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Literature Re: novel in progress, Her Name Is Daisy

    Hello BilbosToes, XD I love your name! It puts a smile on my face! Okay, this needs paragraphs my dear friend. Why? Well, it'll do two things. One, make it ...

    Feb 3, 2013
  • Poetry » Other, Science Re: We Are Finite Beings

    Hello Mochi! I love your name! >.< Anyway, I really like this, I have nothing to say about it! You poem was really strong, full of imagry and imagination! It ...

    Feb 3, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Wonderland

    S'up, I'm Sarah! Let me see...I found it very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very cool! It's really cute in a way! :3 On with the show... *curtains open* ...

    Jan 28, 2013
  • Poetry » Health, Spiritual Re: Meat Suit

    Hey, I'm Sarah, and I come to review your poem! It's cool, it's tlling a story from the persons mind. I believe this has a lot of potential, it's really ...

    Jan 28, 2013
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Other Re: Fly

    Yo, I'm Sarah, by the way! I like this, it paints a picture in my mind instantly! I love it! XD On with the show.. *open curtains* "Open Eyes" *sigh* ...

    Jan 28, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Spiritual Re: A worthy dweller ch.2

    Hi! Okay, this is really awesome! I'm a huge fan of fantasy, and this is a awesome read! To be honest, I didn't read chapter one, but I'll get to ...

    Jan 28, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Humor Re: Chapter 3. (Animal Politics)

    Yo, I am really enjoying this! It is so interesting! I like how you portrayed the rats. The way people see them are...well, rats. But the way you protrayed them ...

    Jan 28, 2013
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Health Re: Time Slips Away

    LOVE.IT.HEAPS! IT'S SUCH A NICE PEICE! XD Heh, I love your name, FermentingFruit! So unique!

    Jan 12, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Humor Re: Chapter 2. (Animal Politics)

    I love these types of stories, full of action and adventure! I can't wait for more! This is very interesting!

    Jan 12, 2013
  • Poetry » Historical Fiction, Horror Re: A Lost Soul

    O.O This is awesome! It kind of scared me, but hey, that's horror for you! It paints a picture in your mind of the dead people and the scene, which ...

    Jan 11, 2013


Worry does not empty tomorrow of its sorrow, it empties today of its strength.
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