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Hey, This was cute, that fact that you tried to write it that is. Don't be so discouraging towards your self, this was a great try! I loved the rhyme ...

Hey, I didn't know you where so poetic! This was very emotional and touching! Everything just running wild like those in the context of the poem. this is really good! ...

Thanks again outofthebox! I'll try to finish it soon!

Thank you very much, there's always room for fine tuning!

Thank you so much! I thought this was long buried and no one would find it again!

Ohhh, dommy you've done it again!!!! It was fabulous.... brilliant once again. The suspense was exhilarating! :arrow: From when they go to the cafeteria and then it's the next day... ...

Thanks, I'll fix waht I can....

Yes, of course, sorry! I'll fix it! Thanks!

Hey, Not fair, you have me crying here! It's beautiful sweetie! I'm going to PM you, OK?

Thanks everyone!

Hi again, Maybe I wasn't clear on what I was saying about the quote; Not to be sounding like in in a snit but your family owned businesses can not ...

thank you so much PhantomInvader, your review as very thorough and really appreichated! I'll give you a little reward!

Thanks for the reviews! DrPepperSkaterPunk, is there anything I can help to unconfuse you? Is there anything in particular that I should make clearer? Thanks again.

Thanks again! My spelling sometimes slips! I really appriechate all the reviews! :D

Thank you so much for your critiques! More are always welcome!