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As the leaves fall and the temperatures drop – It becomes September, the month that changed my life forever. Despite the passage of 75 years- The events of my teenage years have stayed with me all my life.
It was hard to imagine that something of such great magnitude could happen to me, but you could almost say I needed a wake-up call into reality. When I was younger, I was one of the 'cool kids,' but as I come to see it now, I was really just being a bitch to everyone around me. I took everything I had for granted. It took the one person I came to know the greatest to help me to change by ways.
Okay well we've certainly got ourselves an intriguing start there. This character really does manage to draw you right in here. I think you've done a wonderful job there in terms of describing how they feel and how they've developed over the years. It seems we're looking at someone whose pretty much already grown to their full potential and is now reflecting on that growth. Its a powerful message to start on. Let's see where this takes us.
But now, to begin, I must take a walk through the section of Rosewood where I lived. Although the area has since been modernized and changed- Every time I walk along it- I envision the land where I grew up. I am waking in the town square, which slowly merges from platinum steel businesses of big corporations to the red brick, family owned businesses. People walk across the street plagued with braces and glasses, diabetes and AIDS. The metal lifters on the street for the hover cars disappear- and cars roll slowly to the ground, gasoline puffing out of the engine.
Ooooh this is interesting, we're getting a quiet and relaxed description of the future for a change. That is certainly not something that you tend to run into normally, and this one's a pretty interesting one too, not quite bleak per see, but not exactly a paradise either from the looks of things.
I walked passed the real estate center, which was The Crown Café, where I would go with this person and my other friend on Wednesday afternoons for Cappucinos and Muffins.
I inhale as walk further. I pull the photo album out of my purse and take out my laptop as I sit down on a patch of grass. Looking through the album, tears shed my eyes. My memories become crystal clear, and I am ready to begin.
Well that's about how I expected this to end there, with a nice look at the beginning to this story where this person's about to start their reflections. Well its certainly a fitting one I'll say. I think its certainly done enough at this point that I would love to read on and see what these memories are like.
Aaaaand that's it for this one.
As always remember to take what you think was helpful and forget the rest.
Stay Safe
Harry
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