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Re: Remnants Of What Is To Come
This is just beautiful. You took the passing of seasons and turned it all into such an elegant poem. The imagery is incredible and your word choice throughout the poem ...
Nov 6, 2020 -
Re: So this is Love
No problem, I love this poem so much, and that edit definitely does clear up that bit, great job! And don't be discouraged, you did an amazing job on this
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Re: If Only
Hi cactuslily, and thank you so much for your feedback. To be honest, I wrote this in a rush and I really appreciate your evaluation. Also, thank you so much ...
Nov 5, 2020 -
Re: I'm In Love With Who You Failed To Be
I love this so, so much. It captures the pain of learning someone we care about isn't who we thought they are, and the struggle of wanting to idolize them, ...
Nov 5, 2020 -
Re: If Only
I tried to put spaces between the stanzas but I'm new to this website and I couldn't figure it out, sorry. Hope you enjoy anyway ^-^
Nov 5, 2020 -
Re: Don't You Dare
Thank you so much! I really love your writing (:
Nov 5, 2020