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Re: Captain Of The Rum Barrel//Ch.1
Where's da bootay! A cool story about Captain Blake and his ship The Rum Barrel, and her supposed enemy Kiko. In contrast to Toasty, I actually think the paragraphs are ...
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Re: Isadora’s story-Siren’s Desire
At first I thought it was a stand alone story, until I saw the list of related contents. It's a nice story about how Isadora was when she was a ...
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Re: Dust and Echoes
Blue skies, toppled towers... It's a nice story describing that boy who had lost so much, and was in so much pain his mind started to void his memories and ...
Dec 8, 2024 -
Re: Blue Skies Academy - Chapter 5
Wow, right after I asked about it too. Dominic, formally introduced to the readers, in all his glory and unglory. Nice to know that our protagonist worked with horses before. ...
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Re: Blue Skies Academy - Chapter 4
Like father, like son... toned up a bit. Aha, a chance at a green room item. I do have things to say as well, so two birds with one stone. ...
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Re: Christmas at the Meyer’s
If only Jason made his own toys and gave them to himself on Christmas... Wait he's an evil toymaker? The short story is pretty nice flashback type read. The way ...
Dec 5, 2024 -
Re: A Dance of Shadows and Light
Romance, Thin Ice, A Dance of Noble Blades. I found the chapter quite fun with the suspense. A supposed infiltration and recon gone wrong, an epic battle between an assassin ...
Dec 5, 2024 -
Re: Game changer:Chapter 1
I smell... dystopia. False alarm? It's a cool story that reminded me about "The Giver", except it's about games and dailies. Looks like our boy isn't much of a gamer ...
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Re: 25 Things to Remember When You Become a Book Character
One emoji... -WHEEZE*smacks table*- Everytime we see that blockhead main character doing something stoopid, we in our minds are like "wait wait WAITTT noooooooo". Very humorous list of flags and ...
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Re: the lifecycle of a star
"White Nova" -via How Not To Summon A Demon Lord I usually don't read poems, as I never really understood the compressed abstractness. After reading Hel's thoughts, I see that ...
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Re: The Tale of Creation
"Praise the holy father-" Jokes aside, this is a cool way to portray the creation of the forces of the universe as equals instead of good and evil, fantastic. Ah, ...
Dec 4, 2024 -
Re: Blue Skies Academy - Chapter 1
Newbie fantasy writer, youngwritersociety-er, whichever name you prefer, here to give a review for my first star as the website suggested. Although saying that, I myself as a new writer ...
Dec 4, 2024 -
Re: Wyrdsong Chapter 1.1
Hello, I'm new here and would like to fill out one of my 5 reviews for a star... Or so I'd like so say. I'm a big fan of fantasy ...
Dec 3, 2024 -
Re: The Stories And Thoughts Of ADHD(Controversy)
Here comes the villain arc... That was a compliment. Anyways the way you portray the things happening in real life, fact after fact, is pretty great in my eyes. I'm ...
Dec 3, 2024
