Auxiira

Hey Kerza! Auxiira here to review. I love this! Having just read the last book in "The Immortal Nicholas Flamel Series", I totally love the character of Merethyu! Using a ...

Hey Dingobabee! Auxiira here to save your work from the Outer Lands! I can't find anything wrong with this, it's just so good! I love that the Voice calls the ...

Hey! Auxiira here to review! I love this. It reminds me of Lettres des Poilus (a french book about WW2.) I only found a few mistakes: It was his time ...

Hey Cspr, another review for you today! I'll just dive straight in, shall I? It was, however, bettered cared for than most messengers%u2019 horses. In truth, he%u2019d never before seen ...

Hey Jay! Auxiira here to review! I found this whilst listening to Angels by Robbie Williams so it was chosen by favourite song....^^ I found a few problems in this ...

Hey VassternichDrakua! Auxiira here to review your next chapter! I love the fact that we start to hear Ania's thoughts in this one! And I get the feeling that the ...

Hey VassternichDrauka! Auxiira here to review your work! I've said this at least four times today, but I love this! In the end I only found one thing that was ...

Hey Tosh, I said that I would review, so here I am! but I resisted looking around for the young girl. There should be a comma after "resisted". You miss ...

Hey Snoink! I am LOVING this novel! I really can't find much wrong with it and I don't think that much should or could be changed! I love the fact ...

Hey Blackie! Auxii again! Which chapter is this? I can see chapter 1,2,3 um chapter 6 I've looked at but I would like to have chapter 4 and 5 first ...

Hey again Blackie! I'm on a roll today! I'm not going to repeat what I've said for the last two reviews, instead I'm going to say: if you want I ...

Hi Blackie! Auxiira here to review your second chapter. I think that it's going to be a real challenge to change your habits! The same problems as in the first ...

Hey Cspr, Auxiira here to review! I find this piece interesting and I'd love to read some more, but I find that it's a little vague about what Taylor's job ...

Hey Blackie! Auxiira here to review! Somehow, think that you have a problem braking up your sentences. For instance: Tauren Netharu gazed up from the small, rocky, forest stream he ...

Hey! Auxiira here to review! I found a few discrepancies in here so please bear with me! Firstly! Any photographs of them have been long lost. Seeing as the rest ...