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Quite an interesting read. It sounds more sci-fi/star trek than fantasy with the whole saber thing, and the kissing bit struck me with surprise. I really wasn't expecting this to ...

Confusing but likewise, very well described.

Love it. Rap is my favorite, and I would definitely love to hear this some time on the radio. Go for it!

I agree with fading-dream. It had potential but it was kind of boring. It had my interest at first, but then it ended up no-where. Slightly confusing, it did seem ...

Awh, this was really cute. Quite a clever idea, really. Big ups for originality, too. Not much to say about it in-depth, but overall it was a nice read.

10 points for uniqueness! Way to go haha

It's pretty random. But who knows, some times random ideas become the best stories.

Thanks for the reviews... Yeah Idk where I got Starla from, it just like came into my head. I'll change it to Stella. And I thought maybe forbid was forbade, ...

Wow, lucky much Angel of Death!? :P

I'm kinda crappy at critiquing and at poetry, too. But I rather liked your one :) Good work!

Ooh interesting! A very good beginning, I hope to read more of this...

Very interesting, I def wanna read more! It's some what a bit rushed at the beginning, but it ends very well. Are you gonna continue it? I hope so, cos ...

Sounds cool, can't wait to read the rest!

I didn't particularly like this story. Not because of how it was written, just these types of stories freak me out. It was good though. Will there be more? I ...

I don't quite think this is entirely OCD. Sounds more skitzy then anything. This story scared the hell out of me, but it was well written. Good work!