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Here in this street , everything’s the same. Here in this street, people treat me with respect. People are afraid of me. Here in this street , everyone’s the same. ...

Hmm, either I'm late to review this or heaps of people really like this piece, too. Anyway, I haven't really got much to critique you on, seeing as so many ...

And we can see for miles (and miles). All the way across the Sound – I liked that bit, dunno why. It just sounds nice. This sounds kinda like a ...

The dusty, rickety old window gave a suitable view of the world below my feet. The sun made everything seem golden and nice. I could hear the children running and ...

Kinda stumped on what to say. I've never read such a short story that left me feeling like this. I can't really associate a single emotion to your piece, so ...

Wow, I really loved this piece. And you wrote it when you were 12? Impressive. I tell this to everybody I critique, but anyways, I'm not good with nitpicking, so ...

I really liked this prologue! Obviously it is something to do with vampires, but like someone else said, they're not all sparkly and such. It seems like you've got a ...

Kinda evil and morbid, but hey I quite like the evil and morbid. It flows really well and I love the choice of words you've used. Basically it was very ...

Man, you can really feel the pain and anger from this song. Well written, you could perhaps break it up into verses, it would be easier to read also. I ...

but hands can't reverse hours become perverse This poem is good apart from these two lines. I don't think "perverse" is quite the word you are looking for. Sure it ...

I found this piece kind of boring. It was written okay, but there was no real pull. Sure, wings came at the end, but until then it was really just ...

Amazing work, absolutely amazing. Wish I could write like this. WOW. Where'd you get the inspiration? Anyways, I'm not very good at nitpicking, soo I'll just say how much I ...

This seems to be a nicely written story. However I have noticed like many others the lacking of punctuation and grammar. This piece appears to be a rough draft, some ...

This is one of the most strangest stories I have ever read. But how jealous I am to not have thought of it myself. It is brilliant and confusing and ...

I'm not really good at nit-picking, so I'll just tell you how much I loved this story. Your characters were good, however there could be a bit more development in ...