Aust

First of all, thank you for the comments. I really liked this, you clearly portray a sense of loss, we can all relate to this. It must have been hard ...

Well, the poem is talking about emotions that have been secluded and hidden within the soul for a very long time. About dreams that were risen through lots of pain ...

Thanks. I'm very happy you liked it. Can it really happen that there are no mistakes? Aust.

Work??? No, I don't think so. It's just so... so... so... I don't even have words. Beautiful, strong, emotional, what can I say? The last time I felt this way ...

I agree with Passion. If you love him, hold him tight (but not too strong, it can break his bones =)) Love is great, at any age, and you should ...

I forgot to add, the title and the last lines are really closing the circle =)