Aurora49

sorry this was my account on my phone that must have not changed. oops

Haha, I'm not sure why that was sent twice. Sorry, my bad!

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Hey! Awesome job! It's a great concept to a story and I can't wait for the next chapters which I will read as soon as I can! Okay so, in ...

Thank you so much for the kind review and helpful advice!

Okay, I've made some changes. Hopefully it's better!

Thank you very much! I'm planing to introduce the characters more in the next few chapters. I didn't even notice some of that stuff so thank you so much for ...

Yay! Ya, NF is an amazing artist and you did a great job! Be sure to tag me when/if you post any more!

okay, will do! Thank you!

Ya, the game is doge ball, which re-reading this I can definitely see how there would be confusion. I am planning on writing more, so yes some of your questions ...

This is really cool! Well done! Okay first of all it's defiantly giving me NF vibes, Secondly the lines "Pain will always find its way to the surface no matter ...