Audy

LOL! I heard a lot about it, so I picked it up. I couldn't get through it. I dunno. I'm awful :oops: I don't normally leave a book half-way through, ...

Aw, I liked this =) It relates to me in so many ways. Loved how you incorporated the seasons to show the passing of time, it really enforces the point ...

So, I suppose you were mad about something --whatever it was, I'm sorry. On the plus side, you've got a really strong tone to this poem... If you can call ...

Hahaha...I'm sorry I laughed when I read this xDD Some people don't know when to give up, so many stalkers in this world... I like it as a cute poem, ...

Lol, this poem is cute ^^ I'm such a sucker for things like this. I think the descriptions depicted here are perfect, not overly into detail, but I can imagine ...

I like this a lot, you've captivated a lot of the qualities of being humans --mostly we all make mistakes. It's nice and I liked the theme :) I really ...

mhm...lotsa spelling and capitalization errors in this. It really distracts from the work, so make sure you look over your work and fix all these before you post. Oh, why ...

Oh, I really love this poem! :D I imagine someone sitting in an old cabin by a fireplace and a large window showing the frostiness outside, I love how you ...

Hey Summer! Well the first thing I thought was that it /does/ sound like jumbled thoughts ;P The rhythm...I don't know, it's not too terrible but it could use a ...

Lol, I saw this and I'm like, 'okay a poem about a beach' Then I read it and I'm thinking...'no a deep poem about society' -- but when I read ...

I like this =) I agree with what's already been said, you should add some emotions to this piece and give it more depth. I think the rhyme is fine, ...

Why do there harsh words make me feel crammed? there should be 'their' and again here: Why can't they open there eyes and see? You made the same mistake :P ...

Hehe, cute av! (sorry I love kittens!) So anyways... I just saw a few little errors to should be 'too' aloud should be 'allowed', though I'm pretty sure these have ...

I agree with what's already been said, the theme of the poem is interesting and you have some good descriptions, but see -- all you're doing is describing the moon. ...

I loved this poem! It's not about something that we read much about (unless it's mothers day or something), yet we certainly need to. My mom and I are really ...