Audy

I think the third stanza stands out among the three stanzas for me, personally. This line: the seeds you sow in my wonded skin won't grow. I will not let ...

Falcon! This is an interesting poem. I would love to hear the inspiration/story behind it. I really loved the end lines "her something is on the inside" and the play ...

Marms, Arcticus, Ruby!

Hey Silver, I like how this poem almost feels like a piece of granite in the way that it is non-relenting in its narrative, it is, and it is there. ...

Hey Becca, Sorry for the long delay. There are aspects of this I enjoyed, I really felt the vibe and structure for this piece fits well as a prose-poem. I ...

Falconer, I love the concept of war with oneself and how the poem is structured as each stanza illustrating a facet of this war and many long-strung battles- first the ...

Hey KaBooom, I felt the piece was super dramatic there was a lot of clever use of tension and you do a wonderful job of building that tension and holding ...

Catalyst, I apologize xD You were probably like, why are you digging up works from 2yrs ago? I got click-happy and ended up somewhere where I meant to end up ...

Catalyst, Loved it! Fun to read, I get a sense of this swashbuckling kind of adventure, the apprentice and mentor relationship is always fun-I wonder if Aristos and Warren are ...

Catalyst, I loved this c: I found it absolutely full of wamrth and cuteness, mostly because I have a fondness for stories that begin as if around a campfire or ...

Silver! My instinct is to say murio "por" ti, rather than "para". Por vs para is a tricky beast though as I've been agonising over it because on the one ...

Hey Vegas, So there is a lot to like about this piece, definitely a stronger use of imagery. We see a girl transform from pretty to lifeless, the comparison described ...

Hey Vegas, I like the direct-to-the-point quickness of your first stanza. It is conflict inflected lines and that is always going to draw in readers, however, once the premise is ...

PrincessInk, Apologize for the lateness! There is a beauty in the conceptualization of the freshness of ice cream, the coming of dawn, the pensiveness of the speaker- I feel as ...

The first four stanzas seem to all lead up to this last stanza which reads as a conclusion, a revelation, as if the narrator has gotten over doubts and fears ...