AudreyAce

I LOVE THIS This is so beautiful. The last stanza is such a great wrap up and leave such a great feeling with the reader, at least in my opinion. ...

I really really like the message in this poem. Too often is young love dismissed and overlooked. "No one realizes how powerful it can be". I 100% agree. On to ...

Beautiful. This is so beautiful. I love the description that you used in the first four lines, it really helps to visualize the state of the house. My own critique ...

I LOVE THIS. I felt this poem. Last year when I was in a relationship, this is exactly how I felt. So, I can say that it's definitely relatable. I ...

Okay let me just tell you how much I love the message behind this. Many poems I read don't always hit every point on a subject and I think you ...

This so deep. You hit so many great points in here. I love how you started with the "A thousand words, one picture." This made me smile. It kind of ...

Okay, although this was probably just for fun, I LOVE THIS STORY. The idea of the hair changing colors corresponding with feelings was a good idea but the way you ...

Wow the analogy between a girl and the sun is so well thought out and explained. I also love how you said, "How many eyes will I sacrifice to stare ...

I feel like I'm sitting next to your character and I want to read so much more. Please continue this. By the way if this isn't a helpful review I'm ...

Interesting views on the internet. I must say though that the internet can also help a lot. For example this site is a safe place for a lot of people ...

I want to read so much more!! This was amazing and I'm on the edge of my seat. You are a great writer with outstanding skills. This is my first ...