AtticusGallows

I really like the flow. It has nice rhythm. The breaking of the sentences was another nice touch. I think this is very well put together, and I must give ...

Hey man welcome to Yws. I'm new here too I just joined yesterday. Thanks for sharing your post I really enjoyed it! I loved the whole concept of the fire ...

:elephant: This was absolutely amazing! Gah, you paint such a beautiful picture. I love how you made me hear the violins. And how they followed the mood that was being ...

Whoa man, what the hell is going on? I found myself laughing at a lot of this, but I really didn't know why. I found "That one boy from spy ...

Hey, hows it going. I like the whole concept of this rough draft! I think it's very cool how you used child like terms (crayons, coloring books, etc) to represent ...

This was pretty interesting. I liked the first part a lot more then part set in Paris. It grabbed my attention a lot more. I want to know what other ...

I'd have to go with weaver on this too. Short little poems like this (I believe their called hikus or something, I don't really know.) really have to be strong. ...

Hey I'm new too. You'll catch on pretty quickly it's a very user friendly site. just explore. And the beginning of this story kind of seemed rushed. LORRIANE, GET UP. ...

Hey, names Atticus. I know you really didn't look over this again to make corrections so I won't point them out. One thing I will though is you continuously repeat ...

I don't understand most of these questions myself lol. But actually a rose is every color but red. So it really is blue :P. haha So I'm sure you didn't ...

Simple and short, :D I liked it. But I'm sure you know you should capitalize your "I's" in the beginning of each line. I know their not full sentences, but ...

I love the angle on this! I'll never think about mail the same way again! :D I think you did a great job with this story, can't wait to read ...

I like how short and to the point this is. You paint the picture very well in my opinion. :D the only thing is, werewolves and vampires are running out. ...