AtticusGallows

Whoa whoa whoa! You can't leave me with a cliff hanger like that! This is a amazing short you have going here. Love the visuals you give. Of course I'd ...

I'd have to agree with Ish. She pretty much summed everything all up. I'd like to say the reason your poem didn't have much flow is because there was a ...

Ha, I had watermelon with salt today, but I didn't eat it outside. Way too hot. But this is a pretty cool little piece I gotta say. You're rhyme scheme ...

Haha this is really cool:). I like the approach you used, and it was well executed. I've heard the Devil is supposed to be a real charming guy. So I ...

This was pretty good, but I have to agree with some of the statements above. Shorts need captivating imagery, and you have a few grammar errors. To me the stanzas ...

I really enjoyed reading this. Your stanzas are well formed and rhyme scheme has a nice presence. Your imagery detail is remarkable, really great stuff!. Whose vice of death is ...

Venturee:D Glad you're back! I get to be your first review back makes me even happier! I absolutely loved this. It was my kinda read, and the way you make ...

This is extremely deep, and dark. I really hope it's just you exploring some part of your mind with writing, but it feels real. I hope you're ok, and that ...

Hey, just a heads up I got told some stuff once in one of my review because I used one little cuss word in my piece. Someone told me it ...

I really liked this piece! It was fun to read, and I'm glad you had fun writing it! Cause that's what writing is all about:D I saw your stanza, but ...

As the two review above claim this is really a breathe of fresh air, seems like a picked a good morning to poke my head around YWS I'm finding a ...

This is absolutely amazing, it's kinda rare I come across something that makes me actually tear up. Your rhyme scheme, the way you tie in personal details about her, just ...

Your poem here has some very outstanding imagery. The world fell into an interminable winter A spirit that is as old as a guiding star a pulsing heat radiated through ...

Hello best friend! Glad you joined this freakin' sweet site.:D You're little piece here has really inspired me to write again! I love the contrast of love and hate and ...

:D I really liked this. I knew what you were trying to do with the italics and bolding. I liked the style. It's different, it's daring, it's you. I can ...