AttackOfTheFlash

This was awesome! It's a cute, comical read that made me smile! :)

On right side of your screen it should say "edit work" when you're reading this. It's around the middle of the right side when you're reading a work that you ...

No problem!

With some work, this could be an awesome story! :) Plague and people being eaten alive? Heck yeah!

Thanks for the review! I greatly appreciate it! :) Yes, I admit this is pretty rushed. I may go back and add some "meat" to it. I don't know if ...

Thanks a lot for the review! I really appreciate it! :) And yes, I know this is cliche. But it's just an experiment, so it's not like I'm going to ...

Haha I couldn't think of a title. And yes, it's after the Outbreak (the apocalypse, or at least that's what they call it). I don't know if I'll continue it. ...

Don't beat yourself up over some bad reviews. We all get those reviews that make us go, "oh... I messed up so bad!" At first they make you feel bad. ...

Thanks once again for the awesome review! You think I have a talent? Haha, that's a first! Anyway, I think you're an awesome reviewer! :D

Thank you for the review! I really appreciate it! I'll fix those things and work on the paragraph length. :)

No problem! And yeah sometimes it messes up when you post it.

Once again I appreciate your help! I'm definitely going to have to do work on this one, too. Thanks for the review!

Thank you for the review! I appreciate it greatly. The transition in this chapter is more along the lines of Lucia having a nightmare about herself being infected, then awaking ...

Thanks for the feedback! I was really worried about the dialogue/description ratio. I'm glad there is a balance!

Thank you for the review! I appreciate it!