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AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA-takesabreath-AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Loved that. Mary-Sues/Gary-Stus annoy me, but I LOVE creating them on purpose.

I know how this feels. I HATE writer's block, but you could have used more words than just wishing and waiting. That gets a bit repetitive.

That's really, really cute and yet at the same time, really melancholy. Those are two emotions that you don't often see together. I liked the bit about the smile.

Is there a reason this is called emo poetry (which should be capitalized by the way)? Becaues I found it far from emo, it's beautiful and not really that depressing.

You rarely ever see a guy's point of view in this situation, especially in poetry. So it really made me think about what guys think after a break up (or ...

I found the sound effect things pretty cool but I didn't know what they were...they should have been in parathensises (or however it's spelled) or something.

The dashes ended up getting on my nerves, I'm not going to lie. Especially with the periods. It was also a bit repetitive, but it's very emotional and I like ...

I rememeber something like that for piano. I believe it was Every Good Boy Deserves Fudge...which is the same, just lame. Is this supposed to be a teacher talking to ...

I really like the last one. It reminds me Pandora's Box for some reason, actually several of them do. Though I think it's a little awkward when you say no ...

This photographm that i kept at heart. It's photograph. I'm guess that's just a typo though. It's really, really good other than that. Love the emotion.

You have a lot of spelling mistakes, it's intricate for instance. Some of them just look like typos. It's a very good story. But you just need to look back ...

I always feel bad for people like this. They're just sick, people need to get over it. Although, she does seem very sick, like beyond just the strep that you ...

What kind of music would this be? Rock? Pop? Country? I would like to know. It seems to fit a rock ballad or something that Imogen Heap would sing. It's ...

Oh dear, this reminds me of the recent break up that I had with my best friend, Joseph. It's really sad, I'm at school and I may start crying (doesn't ...

That sums up my summer in eleven lines. Great job, I love this poem.