AstrangedbeaR

wow i loved this, i have nothing bad to say about it at all! lol. this was fantastic, great imagary and a good choice of words, keep up the good ...

wow, i really liked this poem, i dont think a theme like this has been done before. first post, and one i really like. nice uchoice of words and excellent ...

Have you ever seen a person die? Been there as they took their last breaths, as the so-called light faded from their eyes? As their brain shut down and their ...

wow, this was excellent, you have a fabulous choice of words and your are very experiened with what you do. please keep up the good words. nice theme also i've ...

She sits alone rocking in the corner Trying to remember what happened to her She knows now why there is a mourner i liked thses first three lines, kinda makes ...

wow, this was really good, the words you used to create the scene were excellent, first line was great, very different from the other poems i have, keep up the ...

good job, although i didnt really enjoy it as much as i wanted to, the repetitive, i can's and i can't were quite annoying, plus for me i think the ...

erm...i liked this i thought this was kinda good actually, created a good feel of being in a mental hospital or a hospital if i pput that correctly. i do ...

i liked this poem i think it was very good, although the short questions didnt really appeal to me. it did for the second stanza but then as you continued ...

erm, this was a pretty good poem i liked it although there were times i did capture the meaning and then i kinda got confused lol. whether it is me ...

i liked both of your poems i thiought they were very good and left that "feel" behind as most poems should do. very good job and well done. oh and ...

i liked this although it did seem like you were trying to fit as many words that could rythme together that kinda lost a little meaning throughout it, however i ...

this was good i like this, it had a very different structuture to it that brings a different feel to the poem. i'm guesing this about a girl who cannot ...

i thought this poem was good although it did sound like song lyrics to me, whether that makes sense or not lol. i dont know what type of reaction you ...