AspiringAuthorA..M.

Yes, Ma'am you will. - I am off to bed. :P Enjoy the remainder of your day. :D

r i n g Nice little effect you have there. :P It looks like a ring. Hm, it doesn't appear to do the ring on this comment. :? But you ...

That was classic. Will review later.

I finally read your comment on my profile. Hehe, I had no idea that comment place existed until now. It's cool if you use my name.

That lone remark had all kinds of wrong in it. Granddad hadn’t been that evil, even though he used to spank me for looking at him . . . well, ...

Adrian is my name.

Thank you very much person above me! I am currently editing according to your words.

People would this work fine? Changing, "My voice as feeble as a barely breathing young wolf, who has just washed ashore after falling into a frozen river." to "My voice ...

There is so many looters that the cops are arresting that they are overwhelmed. And the car is blanketed in shadow because the sky is dark because of the storm ...

OK, I'll edit this as soon as I can. And, I have a different section where people who weren't expecting the war witness it happening, and they are very, very ...

I would love feedback, I haven't gotten any of it at my school. I am truly desperate for it. Thank you person below me. -Adrian

Sort of reminds me of the book I'm writing. We both have some pretty troubled characters.

Please comment. Negative, positive, or if you have a talent of being neutral you can comment to.

Wow, I love the action moment. And I love the name talon, makes him sound like a predatory bird and a real bad person. And if you can do that ...

Oh no tragedy. Well actually my book is the most tragic kind of tragedy, it can be quite depressing. Even for me as the writer.