AspiringAuthorA..M.

I agree with the person above me Assassins Creed is a great game. I've been planning on buying the sequel soon. Although I'll miss Altair. :( Anyway I think you ...

Nice job. I've read from your first piece to here. But I can tell you that I am a bit disappointed that it seems like the whole story will now ...

Ink man is cool! But, I do hope that you don't just revolve the entire story around him. And I can't wait to see how you describe where the lunatic ...

Yeah, I know you heard this before by a previous poster, though he said it differently. The being so frightened that you can't move thing is one of the most ...

“The Lion Who Laid an Egg! You’re gonna love this, Jaden.” Is that a real book? If it is do tell me. :P And about the story itself. I like ...

*Um, person above me or anybody else what leader boards are you talking about?* And onto the story. I think this was a really entertaining read. It's one one of ...

My sweet sister Beatrice, I know that Susana's going to be kidnapped if we don't get her out of the country soon. Please have your "friends" take her to America. ...

And I was rolling in someone else’s life. That I stolen . I felt sick again, my stomach was doing chin ups in my body, and I resisted the urge ...

Hm, I haven't read a poem of this type before. Perhaps because not very many people post them about this subject. I really don't know what to say about the ...

HEHE, a nice little take on the world of punctuation. As the above people mentioned it does sometimes get confusing. But me being mostly insane it does make sense for ...

OK, I've read it. :D I have one question about the ending of this chapter. Why does Celeste have angel wings? I mean he sounds just as evil as Azrael. ...

Hello, fellow YWS member I will be your reviewer today. The guy above me asked me to. But, I would have done it anyway. :D When Candice was nine she ...

Thirty year old Jason Polimer awoke slowly, grumbling as he did. He turned over to the left side of his bed and slowly lowered his foot towards the tiled floor. ...

This is your first poem? I thought you said you had written one before? :P Was that a lie to help you write this poem? :D Anyway, I'll review it ...

“Where are we going, may I ask?” I asked so quietly that I thought she might not have heard. But, sure enough, she turned around to reply. Her expression was ...