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Re: Shadow (Chapter 3, An Interesting Boy)
Hey, Aspawn here for review time! Disclaimer: Don't worry, I read the other chapters too. First Impression: Of the story overall. So, it's a pretty cute, typical (in a good ...
Jun 9 -
Re: Room 214
Hey! Aspawn here for review time- First Impression: The paragraphs were a LOT (see Grammar Warning below) but the actual story is pretty good- well written, a compelling hook for ...
Apr 30 - Re: Nina’s origin Apr 19
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Re: the good die young - part 1
I actually love the description and imagery you used! It's better than some published writing I know, honestly. The part about him needing to go was a little confusing, but ...
Apr 19