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Re: My Crush
You need more descriptions. You need to show how you really feel about them. This poem is childish and something you hear on daily basis. Too many periods and placed ...
Apr 26, 2013 -
Re: If I became a ghost
This poem is deep, dark, and mysterious. I can relate, and it's very well structured. (:
Apr 26, 2013 -
Re: we are human after
I agree with Kaylyn. Learn to spell, correctly structure it, and if you're wanting a rhyme scheme, you should probably check up on poetry. Because, not one sentence rhymes. Sorry. ...
Apr 26, 2013