Ashton

It was a very good poem. I really enjoyed it and it made me feel what true love should be like. If you wrote this in 10 mins and its ...

I, personally, thought it was a good poem. Every one has probably felt this way in there life. My critique is just a little thing that can be fixed easily. ...

A spelling error... Unforgetable is spelled Unforgettable :wink: [quote]Unforgetable petals kept bothering my flower. I wanted to touch you,to feel you.[/quote I would just restructure it like.... thi

That is really good, her is two little things i saw.... What happened mabyo? If that his name it should be capitilaized. And then I saw it once or twice, ...

This a perfect discription of the tender moments we all have when we are in love. Great job capturing it! If I had you perfect way of describing happy things ...

Your poem was stunning. I could almost feel the pain with you. It shows what really goes on inside a girls head. Keep writing and fix the spelling errors that ...